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     They pulled him deep underground beneath the castle. The air down there was rank with death and echoed with cries of pain and suffering. Looking past the bars of jail cells that lined the walls you could make the outline of captured people. They tossed him into a room at the end. There were no windows, and no light could enter. He passed his hands along the walls to try and find his way around the place. As he finished making his way around the room he felt a cold hand grab at his neck. The person's fingernails dove into his flesh of his skin as he threw him across the room. He head crashed against the wall sending blood flowing over his face.
      He felt a large fist slam against his stomach sending blood flying out of his mouth. He was pinned against the wall. He seemed nearly lifeless, blood dripping from his weak body. "well this is a sad way to die....." he said staring into the darkness. The hand let go and he dropped to the floor. "Eido.....is that you?", it sounded like a girl's voice.
©2007-2010 ~BlindedWriter
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Author's Comments

WTF!!!, thats all i can say, where the hell did this come from. you guys all thought this was some super big powerful dude who was gonna beat the hell out of eido didnt you lol

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:iconsanctuaryofsky:
cool
I like it so far :D
good job

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:iconvicioussole:
lol true dude i did think it was some strong manly figure lol
great writting dude

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There's a time to live and a time to die, but isn't it weird that as soon as your born your dying!!!
:iconblindedwriter:
lol i did that on purpose, just to see how people would react
:iconhikarushido:
AWESOME!!!

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:iconsanctuaryofsky:
ur welcome ^^

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laugh longer
think a little less
have more fun
show your personality more and be yourself
don't hold back
love who you want
:iconhikarushido:
=D np

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:iconkuramasloverbaby:
That was interesting! Kinda funny to me.

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